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How to Write a Text Blast That Gets Replies

 •  By , Head of Direct Marketing Operations

How to Write a Text Blast That Gets Replies

A text blast is read on a lock screen, usually from a number the recipient has not saved, often in the middle of something else. You get one short message to answer three questions: who is this, why should I care, and what do you want me to do? Get those right and people reply. Miss one and the text gets ignored, or worse, reported.

This guide is about the message itself. If you are new to bulk texting, start with what an SMS blast is and how it works.

Work within 160 characters

A standard text holds 160 characters, as long as you stick to plain letters, numbers and common punctuation. That limit is tighter than it looks, and there are two traps:

Write to fit one standard text from the start. We prepare every message for sending, but a message drafted to fit reads better than one trimmed at the last minute.

The five parts of a text that gets replies

1. Sender name first

Start with your business name and a colon: "Westside Realty:". Nobody has your number saved, and an unidentified text from an unknown number reads like spam to people and to carrier filters alike. Naming yourself in the first words is also what consent rules expect.

2. The offer, straight away

Lock-screen previews show only the opening of a message, so the reason to care has to come right after your name. Lead with the news or the offer, then the detail: "2-for-1 pasta tonight only" beats "We wanted to let you know about a special promotion".

3. One call to action

Ask for one thing. Reply, or tap a link, or come in. Two actions split attention and usually mean neither gets done. If you include a deadline, make it concrete: "by Friday" works better than "soon".

4. A reply keyword

If you want replies, tell people exactly what to send. One short, obvious word in capitals works best: YES, QUOTE, BOOK. A few rules:

5. A STOP line

Finish with a short opt-out instruction: "STOP to opt out". It costs about fifteen characters, it is expected, and it signals that you are a legitimate sender. People who want to leave will leave either way; making it easy keeps them from reporting the message instead.

A simple pattern: [Business]: [offer or news] [deadline]. Reply [KEYWORD] [what happens]. STOP to opt out.

Examples by industry

Each of these fits in one standard text with room to spare. Character counts are in brackets.

Notice what they have in common: the sender comes first, the offer comes second, there is one keyword, and nothing in them would confuse someone who skimmed the first line. For longer vertical playbooks, see our guides for insurance agents and restaurant promotions.

What to cut

Check it before it goes out

Read the message on a phone, not on a laptop. Send it to yourself and one colleague and ask them what they think they are supposed to do. Count the characters. Click the link on mobile data. Confirm the keyword with whoever will handle replies. Then think about timing: the same text lands very differently at 11am and at 8:55pm, which is why we wrote a separate piece on the best time to send a text blast.

Finally, make sure every number on the list belongs to someone who agreed to hear from you. Good copy cannot rescue a list without consent; see our SMS compliance guide for the rules.

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Frequently Asked Questions

How long should a text blast be?

Aim for one standard text: 160 characters using plain letters, numbers and common punctuation. A single emoji or curly quote switches the message to a different encoding with a 70-character limit, and longer messages are split into parts.

Should I personalise a text blast with the recipient's first name?

Only if the name data is clean. A first name adds length and looks worse than no name when it is wrong, misspelled or in capitals. Your business name at the start does more for trust than the recipient's name.

Can I put a link in a text blast?

Yes, but use one short link on your own domain that opens a page built for phones. Shared public link shorteners are commonly filtered by carriers, and a link plus a reply keyword gives people two competing actions.

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